Boulder
With passing of breaths I could only boulder by,
Allowing the time to pass over
My uneven exterior of flesh worn thin
As if rock being smoothed away,
By burning droplets of clear and tranquil water.
This is how I slowly passed hours,
Simply bouldering by the long hot summer days
On the moss covered porch and steps,
While shadows flicker under what light eyes perceive,
Unable to leave their own ways,
Keeping company as I too boulder the time,
Until weβre smoothed to gritty dust.
(c) Bret Sears – 2010
Very lovely.. Keep up the good work.. π
Thank you! π
Love your unorthodox use of the word boulder. Great job!
Thank you! I first transformed the noun boulder into a verb, then realized it could actually be used as a verb. Glad you liked the new use!
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Creative! Sense of tropical somehow.
Thank you for your comment! Sorry about the late reply π¦
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love the imagery your words create…
so beautiful feel…
Happy Rally.
Thanks Jingle π
This is a great work! The lines I love most are:
“As if rock being smoothed away,
By burning droplets of clear and tranquil water”
It makes me think that in life, every experience constantly shapes us. I love it!!
Thank you for your comment! Glad you enjoyed those lines, spent quite a bit of time deciding how to word it.
The calm, steady pace and rhythm of this poem really imitates the slow rolling of a boulder along a riverbed! I liked the effect π Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for your comment! Glad it had a slow pace to it, overall effect I was attempting to go for π
nice one.
Bless!
Thanks for your comment π
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What a great visual…to use “boulder” as a verb. Very nice poem.
Thanks for commenting! Glad you enjoyed the use of the verb. π
What I love about poets is our willingness to take chances, to see our world with new eyes, to thumb our nose are rules. Love your poem! Hugs, pat
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Thanks so much! Sorry about the late reply, but I will stop by your blog again soon!
splendid imagination and word crafting.
Thanks!
nicely put…
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