Night Love

One night we sat together under the stars
The cold night completely ours
Me and my love beautiful as a rose
Together, forgetting all our woes
Staring into the night above
Forever entranced by this thing called love
We had watched each star as it slowly dies
As the night slowly flies
We sat with the rising sun
And a new day had begun

(c) Bret Sears – 2010

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About poetryoftheasian

I've been writting poetry for only a few years as a little hobby, and have had a few published in a small poetry contest. I currently want to write more and improve as much as I can. Any tips or feedback would be much appreciated. It is possible that after a few weeks I will revise parts of some of my poems.
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18 Responses to Night Love

  1. Ji says:

    Meme participation awards,
    Sorry for being late.
    It takes me days to have everyone notified!

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  3. Jingle says:

    beautiful images,
    love in sight.
    Cool poem!

  4. Batty says:

    I like it! So serene and the image so tranquil, love-full 🙂 Cheers!

  5. Jingle says:

    help me achieve 55 comments goal by leaving a comment under the post…
    take the awards from previous post after that.
    thank you in advance.

  6. sirenadelfirey says:

    A love story for all time.. what a wondrous thing to share.

    Thanks to Jingles for leading my way.

  7. Amit Khanna says:

    Good one! nice read!

  8. Short Poems says:

    Really cool poem, enjoyed it.

  9. luna12780 says:

    Very sweet and poetic. I felt a sense of joy and peace as I was reading it. Nice work.

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