Love

Love

Venus, Where art thou?
Where is thy rapturous love?
Thou hast captured the hearts of men
With thy coquetry acts
Over and over, and over again.

Thy love hast been since dawn’s creation,
Since the elder days once forlorn.
Yet it seems that thou art not here.
Now from life’s liveliness thou detracts,
And leaveth me with a single tear.

Still, thou expected praise of jovial poetry
Although thou were nowhere to be seen
In my darkest hour, my slowest decent
Thy love was an affront to the heart inexact,
Thou hast left me to my lament.

So I hereby with obstinacy state,
If there ever is or was a love
It shall never be my love.

(c) Bret Sears – 2010

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About poetryoftheasian

I've been writting poetry for only a few years as a little hobby, and have had a few published in a small poetry contest. I currently want to write more and improve as much as I can. Any tips or feedback would be much appreciated. It is possible that after a few weeks I will revise parts of some of my poems.
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10 Responses to Love

  1. Ji says:

    http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/yes-i-can-handle-it.html

    my post for the Poets’ Rally is here.
    thanks for reading it.

  2. Ji says:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/05/thursday-poets-rally-week-17-may-6-12-2010-homecoming/

    you are given three award from the post from me.
    thanks for the invaluable support!

  3. Ji says:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/13/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-for-nomination/

    Please feel free to nominate fellow poets for April Celebrate Poetry award.
    Many thanks!

  4. Jingle says:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/13/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-for-nomination/

    24 hours to vote for 15 of your favorite poets,
    many thanks!

    u rock!

    poets are not limited to the lists,
    please feel free to vote any poets you know who deserve to win…
    BEST!

  5. oinky says:

    wow..i really like this poem of yours..thanks for sharing! 😀 cheers!

  6. Jingle says:

    hope that you do visits, I linked you in as Rally 25 participant…

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/awards-from-the-blogging-universe/one-lovely-blog-award/

    two awards 4 u.

  7. Jingle says:

    love is fun when it comes mutual,
    beautiful explorations of emotions…
    🙂
    excellent job!

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